无眼杰克XxembermasterxX XxDarkStorm+u PhoenixMothxX(Eyeless JackXxembermasterxXXxDarkStorm_PhoenixMothxX)——欧美十大最恐怖的虾类

无眼杰克XxembermasterxX XxDarkStorm+u PhoenixMothxX(Eyeless Jack XxembermasterxX XxDarkStorm_PhoenixMothxX)——欧美十大最恐怖的虾类在欧美十大最恐怖的虾类中排名第11名。

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让我们看看这个故事的缺点，好吗？-主人公米奇不仅比砂纸还平淡，一点也不有趣，也不讨人喜欢，而且在没有肾脏的情况下，他还能很好地工作和行走。见鬼，直到医生告诉他，他才注意到！-第二天晚上发现杰克的时候，米奇给他拍了一张照片，而不是，我不知道，用重物打他，还击，报警。该死的，为什么他第二次睡在他哥哥家，在他晚上做了肾脏切除手术之后？呆在医院怎么样？或者找警察护送？-杰克并不可怕。他真的不可怕。他的外表并不是特别令人不安，他的作案手法是可笑的和不切实际的，我们只是没有足够的时间去真正害怕这个角色！总之，荒谬的陈词滥调，可笑的愚蠢的性格决定，以及简单的…更多

Let's check out the flaws of this story, shall we?-The main character, Mitch, is not only blander than sandpaper and not interesting or likable in the slightest, but also somehow manages to function and walk perfectly WITHOUT A KIDNEY. Heck, he barely even notices it until the doctor tells him about it!-When spotting Jack on the second night, Mitch takes a photo of him, instead of, I don't know, hitting him with something heavy, fighting back, calling the cops. And hell, why did he sleep at his brother's house the SECOND time around AFTER he had something REMOVE HIS KIDNEY at night? How about staying in the hospital? Or getting some police escort?-Jack isn't scary. He really isn't. His appearance isn't particularly unsettling, his Modus Operandi is ludicrous and unrealistic, and we are just not given enough to actually become afraid of this character!In conclusion, the ridiculous amount of cliches, hilariously dumb character decisions, and the plain ... more

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哦，上帝！不是法尼尔！哦，不！-自由泳

OH GOD! NOT THE FANGIRLS! OHHH NO! - Freestyle_Fujoshi

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警告：这个故事包括一个玛丽苏。米奇，太蠢了！首先，他怎么不知道脸上有个伤口？第二，当有人把你的肾取出来的时候，你怎么不醒来呢？第三，为什么米奇认为最合乎逻辑的做法是拍一张照片，而不是尖叫？最后一点，为什么警察知道他的死讯，尸体还在那里？老实说，这是我读过的最糟糕的故事

Warning: this story includes a Mary-sue. Mitch, is so stupid! First of all, how does he not realize there's a cut on his face? Second of all, how do not wake up while someone is taking your kidney out? Third, why did Mitch think the most logical thing to do was take a picture of the thing instead of maybe, I don't know, screaming? And lastly, how come the guys body was still there even though the police knew about his death? Honestly, the worst story I've ever read.

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这个故事毫无意义，甚至作者也承认它很糟糕。它可以用一句话来描述：一个邪教从哪里冒出来，让一个男孩瞎了眼。别忘了吃人。现在既然你知道了，就不要读这个故事了。—XxembermasterxX

The story made no sense whatsoever even the author admitted it was bad. It can be described in a sentence: A cult which appeared out of no where made a boy go blind p.s don't forget the cannibalism. There now since you know it don't read the story. - XxembermasterxX

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呃，是少数几只真正可怕的毛骨悚然的虾类之一。不是最可怕的，但比许多毛骨悚然的虾类都好——黑色风暴

Eh, one of the few Creepypastas that are actually scary. Not the scariest, but better than many Creepypastas - XxDarkStorm_PhoenixMothxX

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如果结局写得不好，每个人都是笨蛋

Breif poorly written bad ending and everyone is a dumbass

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他为什么要拍照？！

Why did he take a PHOTO?!

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他的故事无聊，愚蠢，毫无意义。不过我喜欢他^=

His story is boring, stupid and makes no sense. I like him though. =^v^=

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我看见一个可怕的怪物！我要拿出手机拍张照片！哇…哇

I see a creepy monster! I'm gonna pull out my phone and snap a picture!Wow...just wow